Training-any help?

*Rose waits in a barren wasteland, sitting on her coffin, waiting for someone to come along.*

i then walk by and see rose in her coffin and asked if i could be the one she trains with

*Rose hops off the coffin, landing a few meters behind Shinjou. " I don't mind, but even though this is training, your putting your life in danger. So are you positive?"

kenji appears

do you mind if i join

*Rose snapped her fingers, and once she did her coffin opened up, and a black mist rolled out. Along with the mist, foot long spiders began to rush out, in groups of twenty. " The more the merrier. I have to see what these little spiders can do..." The spiders quickly dashed along the ground and pounced at the two ninja.*

(i pull out the blade of hades and used my shadow of hell jutsu)

took out about 10 at once

{Kenji, that lacked so much description...}

*The spiders began to dash around the field quickly, leaving a trail of web where ever they went. Rose jumped up into the air, looking down at the area to notice the formation and pattern of the web. "Hmm....okay, now!" After leaving web all over the area's ground, each spider would jump over kenji and Shinjou, trying and quickly wrapping the web around them.*

"i quickly disappear and appear behind rose" and kick her down out the air into her own webs "then i used my shadow of hell jutsu again to burn all the spiders and webs" "i then pull out a atomic bomb that i got from ren and i dropped it down while rose was still falling"

{Okay, that was called an auto-hit one, two, I highly doubt you could be quick enough to have me not notice your incoming...}

*Rose grabbed Kenji's leg as he tried to kick her, and swung him down into the web. As he was stuck in the web now, the spiders raced toward him, trying to devour his body. Half of them are stopped in their tracks thanks to Shinjou. " Hm, they don't seem too smart, but they are spiders afterall..." Rose landed on top of her coffin, and from it a single, bigger spider, about four feet creeped out, spitting venom at Shinjou.*

"i try my best to get out but they were coming to fast" so i yield out to shinjou to help me but he was already to busy "so i begin to roll around in the websas fast as i could to create a twister" which knocked them all off of me "and then i jumped into the bigger spider and took control of it and went after rose"

*Rose made a dash towards the giant spider, and grabs one of its legs, and rips it off. She quickly rotates her body and throws a kick, knocking off another leg, causing the spider to fall. " Ugh, why do these spiders seem so stupid? I may just need more training with them..." Rose used the leg she took off the spider and began beating it to a pulp with it.*

"i fly out of the spiders body and i tired to throw a dagger at rose" "and jumped into another spiders body and jumped up at her again" and then i began to spit venom at her

i turn into a shadow and stay qiuet so they coundnt see me