Raven Genin Of The Rising
Number of posts : 49 Age : 1932 Location : Wateing in the woods Job/hobbies : Nothing Much Kekkei Genkai : Power to Manipulate Gravity Registration date : 2009-03-23
| Subject: Raven's Justu Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:46 pm | |
| Accel dance: I get into a fighting pose and as i do i fly up to you punch and kick you all up in the sky and then after your all beat up I slam your face into the ground.
Accel Shot: I power up energy into my hands and when the energy is at it's point I fire six shouts at you the first five are the week ones but the sixed one is the strongest and when you get hit with all of them you might go boom.
Pinpoint Energy Field: I power up mass amounts of energy in both of my hands and then I put both energys together they fourm an energy field that cant be broken.
Burning Slash: I take my sword and throw it into the sky after thats done I rush you and beat you around for a while then when my sword comes down I take it and dice you into and then I blast you into dust.
Energy Drain: I take my hand and grab you by the nack as I do so I start to drain your energy away form you.
Gigantic slam: I take my fist and jump high into the sky and I come down and smash my fist into the ground wich cause's an earthquake.
Gigantic Blast: I put all of my power into one ball of energy then I fire it at you and when it hits you I throw another one that makes both of them exploade.
Last move javelin: I grab you and take you up into the sky and I self-destract but not me but a clone.
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Sadako Serene Angel
Number of posts : 628 Age : 28 Location : I sit at home, thinking 'This is too good to be true' Job/hobbies : I love writing and reading novels, and my job? Bein' lazy I guess XD Kekkei Genkai : Morning Glory (朝顔) Registration date : 2009-03-09
| Subject: Re: Raven's Justu Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:08 pm | |
| Try using 'If' and not when. It's really all up to chance... | |
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Raven Genin Of The Rising
Number of posts : 49 Age : 1932 Location : Wateing in the woods Job/hobbies : Nothing Much Kekkei Genkai : Power to Manipulate Gravity Registration date : 2009-03-23
| Subject: Re: Raven's Justu Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:19 pm | |
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Sadako Serene Angel
Number of posts : 628 Age : 28 Location : I sit at home, thinking 'This is too good to be true' Job/hobbies : I love writing and reading novels, and my job? Bein' lazy I guess XD Kekkei Genkai : Morning Glory (朝顔) Registration date : 2009-03-09
| Subject: Re: Raven's Justu Tue Mar 24, 2009 4:31 pm | |
| As in .... and when you get hit with all of them you go boom.
See how you said when? Try saying If. It's not 100% certain if the person you are facing will get get hit.
Nothing major, just wanted to tell you... | |
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Raven Genin Of The Rising
Number of posts : 49 Age : 1932 Location : Wateing in the woods Job/hobbies : Nothing Much Kekkei Genkai : Power to Manipulate Gravity Registration date : 2009-03-23
| Subject: Re: Raven's Justu Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:07 am | |
| OkI will do change it when I get the time | |
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